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Ben Nichols's avatar

This one would be great for the read-aloud project - lot of good-sounding lines and alliteration. Some great images here.

Anna Dufek's avatar

Wow! I love these lines so much:

“God looks for those who let

Grief bloom bright flowers”

I recently wrote a song with the same concept so that really resonated with me. Here are some of my lyrics:

“Honor every grief

Plant the shards like seeds

In the soil of Your great love

When it’s hard to hope

You make beauty grow

Say the best is yet to come”

So grateful for the work you’re doing. I believe in the need for Psalms and poetry for spiritual practice, and the power of lament to build intimacy with God.

Megan Huwa's avatar

Thank you for the convicting yet hopeful Psalm poem. This line especially resonates: "They wake to fear and sleep to fear." How I find myself in this same fear, forgetting that we have a good God who raises us up, walks beside us, and offers His peace.

Anna Dufek's avatar

Aww you’re here in the comments too! I love your vulnerability. (Waving at you sister!)

Abigail's avatar

Let grief bloom bright flowers. Yes, let it be so.

Joyous Thirst's avatar

“But he only finds violence

Riding the cold claws

Of inertia to a bloody ground.”

This takes me right to the story of Cain & Abel, connecting the Now to the Then.